Peer Assessment of opening scene

- Set in East London
- Not your stereotypical american gangsters
- Guy sitting in a chair tied up whilst a group of men (gangsters) stand in front of him and the man in the chair is explaining himself to the group so that they wont kill him but a man pulls out his gun and shoots the man in the chair.
What worked well in my opening scene was that i used the typical use of death and that someone died which is similar to the film 'Goodfellas'. Also had good use of weapons and its typical for gangsters to carry weapons and kill people. What i could of improved was that it could of been more thought through and could of included more speech instead of just saying that the man was talking. I could of also included some shot types and where the scene is set so the audience can get a better idea of the scene.